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 Post subject: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 5:28 am 
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First music I made.


Pretty decent imo.

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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:51 pm 
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I could help you on fl studio (it sounds like fl studio) if you want? Nice beat for your first tho! ^^


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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:58 pm 
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McAwesome wrote:
I could help you on fl studio (it sounds like fl studio) if you want? Nice beat for your first tho! ^^

Thank you, and you're right it is FL studio.

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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:25 pm 
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Lol, I'm good U .U If you're interested of becoming pro, knowing how to master and use lfo the right way, I can mentor :o


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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:25 pm 
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Firstly, the whole song sounds very disjointed to me.

The drums throughout the whole song could've used some good reverb and some more "organic" sounding samples. The hi hat that comes in around 0:22 sounds really cringeworthy...I know what you were going for, but you didn't do it too well. Around 0:45, it sounds like you just kinda went apeshit with the swing slider in FLStudio. Try not to use that too much if you are just starting off...

Those spacey sounds throughout the song sound pretty good to my ears, but they really start fuck up the song around 0:45. Around then, they aren't too in time and sound just really shit...maybe adjust the timing of those slightly if you were going for an "off beat" sort of sound during that section. And 1:04 through 1:17 sounds too busy and doesn't have a good amount of low end.

This song could've really used some good sub bass (90 Hz and under...) and it would've been more appealing that way.

But yes, pretty decent for a first...I look foward to hearing more from you.


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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:52 pm 
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Extremely good cc antarctica, youre making yourself look really good for that ranker position

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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:18 am 
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The whole thing sounds so simple to me, feels like you dint really give thought and time to what would fit and theres no overall idea to this whole thing.
Drums as over all are not in the beat that well and mostly confuse the listener.

Not bad for you first thing but not the kinda thing i would listen from my mp3.


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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:28 pm 
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Not bad.
but i laughed when the guy said "Activate".

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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 3:18 pm 
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From the part where they guy said activate it went off for a moment. Thr beat went awkward, not fitting into the rest and him saying activate was off beat. I suppose it was pretty decent for the rest though.


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 Post subject: Re: Crafty's Music Thread
PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 1:26 pm 
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i lol'd at 0:58


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