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 Post subject: Stuff... + Scribblin' (rap, making up as I write this)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 6:14 pm 
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Scribblin' (whack imo):
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Everybody keeps callin'
if I wanna be chillin'
with them, but I'm too busy killin'
the fucking mic
and all I ever wanted was just to have some fun
but now everybody keeps giving me a punt
a mental one, tellin' me to get famous
but I don't wanna be one
I feel like I'm the lamest
so after this I'll be gone
I'll be shameless
I won't be sharing my knowledge
I'll just be among
the huge crowd around me
and not have a thing to say
I'll just be there
and if you even dare
to recognize me
from my fucking career
I'll make you look like a fucking queer
and as I sear
like an eagle
I'm thinking about them people
acting like fucking smeagle
to me
I'm fucking precious to them
their precious
and as I have got no right to believe
I'll stay careless
not able to see
any more maggots
thinking I'm the fucking best
stop acting like the fucking pest
you are, right now
or I'll give you a scar
a mental one
you will be the only one that had gotten harm
for I'm harmless
not the greatest enemy
don't even wanna be famous
don't want no pubilicity
but I'm too popular for that
but as I'm shameless
I jell all my thought out the public
and my friend hear it
and stop giving me attention
what the fuck do I do now
I'm gettin filled with tention
and as I think of my words
I realize what I said
it's all bad
and I should never have told them that
I grow sad
thinking I should've just gotten famous
but that'd be my loss
I'm always the loser in the end
I'll always lose my friends
but now publicity is gone
so I got all that I wished
but it ain't good too
it's the publicity that I miss
I'll just kiss
with my girl again
and she'd know what that means
giving her attention
making me show I want the same
and as I play a game
I get famous in the end
and I'm ashamed
I never wanted this to have happened
it's all a game
it's just how you look into life
if you're positive about what you are
you will always be off nice
and as my heart
feels this is what I always desired
I drop some charts
then I suddenly feel tired
I'm done
again
I drop the mic
my friends
see it zoming again
I'm losing it all in the end
but they remember this
my friends
they pull me back up
they make sure I don't get as fucked up
as 2 girls 1 cup
I grow mad
but with that I make myself sad
I'll just stay happy
and get some rest whenever I need it
now I'll be gone
I still need to write a hit
so g'bye, I'm off
you'll see me when I grow tough
but hey
remember you're always better off
thinking positive
always think about the bright side
get to give
whenever you need to give
it'd make you able
to make you take
whenever you want just take a break
at times
so now yeah
I'm always having good times
but g'bye
as I said I am gone
so now say hi
to the current time.


Mkay, this is kinda freestyling, but then by writing. Tell me some opinions and things to improve on.
Edit: It's fucking long, and I miss some S's lol.


Stuff...:
Spoiler :
I hate it how many people think their life's fucked up
It's like they's not smart enough to stop
cuz if you really seen enough fucked up shit
you wouldn't even bother to bitch about it
and when they wanna get to rap
they wanna make it explicit
and they tryna act like they need a biskit
actually acting like a wannabe dipshit
they'd be better off imitatin' hippies
now zip it
I'm tryna think off some lyrics
I will try not to mimic
the faggots calling themselves a gimmick
I'll stay timid
not trying to be horrid
I'm just gonna make it complete
I'll finish it concrete
and I'll give you this
you're swift
like a fucking monkey
but you're as headstrong as a donkey
making you not listen to my honk
you'll be torn up by a truck
I'll hide you in the trunk
I'll get the fuck
outta that place
all I can think of is your face
you were a disgrace
and you were lost in a maze
of words
that left you unchanged
you were terrified
in the last seconds
of what we shall call a life
trying to stab me with a mental knife
but what's important
I live
and I have grown decisive
I will never ever get famous
I find myself way too lame for this
I just wanna stay nameless
let me get out of this shit
cuz I'll say this
I've sunk deep shit
I'll never get back to this place
I'll just leave you amazed
how many tracks can miss it
and get shit
but not by me
by mister
I don't know his name but here he is
so now here's a biskit
now I'll leave you cuz I'm just shit.


Last edited by sKale on Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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 Post subject: Re: Scribblin' (rap, making up as I write this)
PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 6:38 am 
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What's the meaning or saying in this?


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 Post subject: Re: Scribblin' (rap, making up as I write this)
PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:23 pm 
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Brilliant.

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 Post subject: Re: Scribblin' (rap, making up as I write this)
PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:29 pm 
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Crafty wrote:
Brilliant.

I disagree.
I find it pretty whack, now that I'm looking back. Especially the start.

@McToast: Kinda something I've been thinking of these days, turning it into a huge paradox of rhymes n shit.


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 Post subject: Re: Scribblin' (rap, making up as I write this)
PostPosted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 3:50 am 
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I agree with crafty, its pretty good

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 Post subject: Re: Scribblin' (rap, making up as I write this)
PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:41 pm 
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well this is just words you cant really tell the beat but i think its good.


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 Post subject: Re: Stuff... + Scribblin' (rap, making up as I write this)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:20 pm 
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I might actually get to record this one so you guys can hear my voice. I'm trying to make a beat for it with FL studio. Thanks Mctoasty for giving me fl studio.


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